Feedback

Today we were told to give feedback to each other about our videos. The people making documentaries were meant to give the promo group feedback, and vice versa. This is the feedback we received from Philippa. I agree with most of it, and alongside the feedback we will get back from Bournemouth will help us create a good video.






Philippa's feedback is simply:

-Beginning cuts really good, quick cuts are really effective.

- Too much footage, not enough text or voice over - needed more text or a voiceover to make it interesting.

-Too many slow cuts towards the end - needs consistent cutting throughout.

I think this is fair enough, at the beginning we were trying to cut fast and to the music, but that took a long time, and we couldn't keep it up for the whole video. When we started to put interviews in and play the footage before them, we realised that we would have to slow down the cuts or nothing would make any sense, so it gradually slows down towards the end.

When we go to Bournemouth, we will be able to edit it a bit more and work with the feedback we have been given to create something good. I think we might have to just speed some bits up and add some more general information about getting in touch and stuff. One of the bands names doesn't come up, and some of the information needs to hold for a bit longer. When we have feedback from our teacher, and some students at University level, we should be able to create something very good.